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i don't know what to think of this paint sketch. i mean, i like it, it served its purpose (draw something that wasn't a mecha reign page.) but something about it is off for me. then again, i might be crazy, so i can't really judge.

what say you?

-Daniel Irizarri Oquendo

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:icongingashi:
~Gingashi Jun 4, 2009  Professional Artist
well it's a sketchy- so don't really feel like critiqing but since you asked I will do it for you. :)
Someone already said values- I agree. But as for Capt. He could have more emotion to his face (not necessarily rage, but even muscular straining from the exersion of jumping from a blast etc would do) and it'd be great to extend his shooting arm all the way out instead of tucked in. Last, I guess would be the cross shaped gun flash shape and the little photon blast thingies- hehehe- I'm just teasin, but yeah, could be that too.
All that aside, it's a neat and action packed sketch... lotta war imagry rolled into one.
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:icondio-03:
~dio-03 Jun 6, 2009  Student Artist
yeah i really kinda hate this drawing and wanna scap it. it has no merit to me, really. it was an ok idea, but i just was NOT in the mood of putting in any effort to it. all of your points are completely valid here.
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:icongingashi:
~Gingashi Jun 16, 2009  Professional Artist
you can always try again fresh. :) don't worry, there's that hit or miss with spontaneous sketching sessions.
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:iconsnarebang:
~snarebang Jun 2, 2009  Professional General Artist
Killing nazis its always fun!
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:icondio-03:
~dio-03 Jun 2, 2009  Student Artist
ALWAYS.
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:icondichiara:
~dichiara Jun 2, 2009  Professional Artist
I like it, Dan. But I think it would be cooler if you draw Cap. bigger.
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:icondio-03:
~dio-03 Jun 2, 2009  Student Artist
yeah! that would have done alot. -__- its a dead drawing now, so no worries.
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:iconadrianbago:
Muy bueno!!
Que fuerza tiene!
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:icondio-03:
~dio-03 May 29, 2009  Student Artist
no estoy totalmente contento con esta imagen, pero al menos, me alegro que te guste.
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:icongaston25:
I like the angle of the drawing and all of the action surrounding Cap, maybe it's his calmness that is a little bit off? A grimace or yell would be more appropriate to match all the chaos going on around him. Just my two cents.
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