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Hey everyone. quick note, for those who're not familiar with the flipbook flash-thing, let it load and when the image comes up, just click on the top or bottom right corners to pass the pages.

thanks to clickmon again, for the template!

please feedback is invalueble! let me know what you all thought.

-Daniel Irizarri Oquendo.

(also, might contain some mature language.)

Chapter 001: [link]

Chapter 002: [link]

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:iconnightdranzer:
ahh, so much better when you have in real life eh Danny?
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~dio-03 Feb 4, 2010  Student Artist
true! the issue became new again once i printed it.
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*ZhouRules Nov 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
dude this is sick. great artwork. did you do the flash yourself or how did you get it to flip like a book like that? I'm doing a webcomic myself and I'm trying to learn flash for page turning haha =P
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~dio-03 Nov 12, 2009  Student Artist
THANKS! much appreciated! i'm glad you enjoyed the art. there's actually a template you can download with all the page turning specific stuff. i'm flash handicapped so i couldn't tell you more than that.

(i don't even know the link.... i just got lucky and have an awesome friend that helped me.)

good luck on your webcomic!
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*ZhouRules Nov 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks man. I'll try and find it.
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~Esktasy Aug 17, 2009  Student General Artist
"'Insane' gets you laid" while shooting at that phallic thing... comedy gold.

The story and the art are awesome... and I really love your panelling and the pace. This, sir, kicks ass :)
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~dio-03 Aug 17, 2009  Student Artist
thanks! much appreciated! i'm glad you liked it!
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~Geoffo-B Jul 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
All right this is almost midnight here and I'm kind of tired so I focused, as a first reading, on your drawing and your composition.

And this was quite good actually :) you've got some very nice action sequences and dynamism here!

As I told you before, I do like the way you're using the gray tone, and thus, I sometimes thought that the regular thin line were too much. Seeing it on the faces, on the clothes, on the robot in the end, you should choose. I think doing on the faces was interesting, and on the robot too (since his part are "smooth"), but less on the clothes.
I think that by doing less you will put more emphasize to your gray tone (and thus make a better "alchemy" between your drawing the gray tone).

But I haven't read the other critic so maybe this is just me :)

As for the story, well, I'll reread the 3 issue straight soon :)

Anyway bravo man!
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~dio-03 Jul 10, 2009  Student Artist
geoffo! wow this is through and i agree whole harted ly on the meshing of grays and lines, i'm still trying to find some happy medium between them and i guess this is just another try at it, no?

thanks for the words of wisedom!
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~Geoffo-B Jul 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
my pleasure man, much deserved!

I plan to draw your character soon as a warm up, I like their designs :)
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