Hey everyone. quick note, for those who're not familiar with the flipbook flash-thing, let it load and when the image comes up, just click on the top or bottom right corners to pass the pages.
thanks to clickmon again, for the template!
please feedback is invalueble! let me know what you all thought.
-Daniel Irizarri Oquendo.
(also, might contain some mature language.)
Chapter 001:
[link]Chapter 002:
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(i don't even know the link.... i just got lucky and have an awesome friend that helped me.)
good luck on your webcomic!
The story and the art are awesome... and I really love your panelling and the pace. This, sir, kicks ass
And this was quite good actually
As I told you before, I do like the way you're using the gray tone, and thus, I sometimes thought that the regular thin line were too much. Seeing it on the faces, on the clothes, on the robot in the end, you should choose. I think doing on the faces was interesting, and on the robot too (since his part are "smooth"), but less on the clothes.
I think that by doing less you will put more emphasize to your gray tone (and thus make a better "alchemy" between your drawing the gray tone).
But I haven't read the other critic so maybe this is just me
As for the story, well, I'll reread the 3 issue straight soon
Anyway bravo man!
thanks for the words of wisedom!
I plan to draw your character soon as a warm up, I like their designs